Ela Kwaterski
Monday, July 18, 2011
Im submitting this poem, feedback please?
It's REALLY good but I just think the word "memories" sounds out of place and the one line "Kindling an old fashioned romance mixed with a little imagination" seems weird, maybe it's just me though.
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